Thursday 3 July 2008

Dying poet

The tale of a petulant failure
Is dying poet’s way of expression
He wants to punish the entire existence
His only thought in extinction

His heart may have imagined the heaven
With the only existing particle
But now he could not even sense
A single poetic recital

He is asking for the arrival
Of flower, of fountain, of rain
Still he gets soaked in his own
Sweat, blood and pain

He may, or he may not, is the only question
He ponders, though the answer is known
Never again could he get inspired
By his thoughts, his love, his moans

12 comments:

vikaz said...

"though the answers are known" ;-)

vikaz said...
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vikaz said...

Use 'dying' instead of 'dieing' ;-)

Ashraf said...

Six things i would like to say:

1.I hate Microsoft word
2.Still it was my mistake
3.Thanks Vikas and Vineet for pointing them out
4.Maybe the poet is dying;-)
5.Mistakes fetched me faster response
6.What did you delete Vineet ?

C. said...

Never again could he get inspired
By his thoughts, his love, his moans...

That is my favorite line. Imagine never being inspired again. That would just suck.

Anonymous said...

i didnt write anything till now!! this is my first post. will comment later.

Ashraf said...

@Claudia

Indeed that will suck. What is a poet without his inspiration?

@Vineet
I am waiting...

vikaz said...

I deleted the comment ;-) It was published twice.

Missy said...

The depths of your poetic grasp is awesome. Some very true points reflected here within your poem.

Missy

Ashraf said...

Thanks for those appreciative words Missy.

Love to read some of ur thoughts too

Mona said...

It is death...

to know a poet... to be a poet...


there is always a stage when life seems as empty as words...

Words & life...a poet always is a process of figuring both...

Ashraf said...

Nice way to put a profound thought in simple words.

Thanks Mona for your wonderful analysis