The smile that never came to lips
Is like the candle that never got lit
The desire that never got fulfilled
Is like the child that never felt thrilled
The innocence that got defiled
Is like the bride that never walked the aisle
The effort that never saw success
Is like the traveler that never found his address
The appetite that has never been fed
Is like the poem that has never been read
Know Me
- Ashraf
- These are the few adjectives which may define me from time to time. Some of them are contradiction in themselves…but what to do…This is me...alphabetically... Adventurous, Dull, Friendly, Good-at-heart, Good-sense-of-humour, Helping, Indifferent, Insightful, Intelligent, Laid-back, Logical, Loquacious, Recluse, Sleepy, Sensitive, Simplifier, Understanding, Unique, Vindictive. For full details wait for my autobiography!
7 comments:
The smile that never came to lips...is like the poem that has never been read...
The smile that came to the lips but made no one feel better...is like the poem that has never been understood...dear.
I understood the poem and liked it as well but cudnt follow the title..'sImile'
A 'simile' is a comparison between two things...thats what I am doing here. Trying to depict a feeling with something tangible.
It was one of those simple poem u write when u r bored with the haevy ideas...
hey ashraf..i didnt like this poem!
looks like u wrote in a hurry
it was written in a hurry...as a matter of fact...which u noticed
...i m glad
Thanks Rebicmel.I am flattered :-)
I think I have come to right blog !
Man, you are so much like me in so many things. Your profile doesn't match mine but the writing style (adjectives) matches.
Your liking for ghazals ? Oh again. A few days back I posted a ghazal by Mehadi Hasan. :-)
Your poems ? very intriguing. Well, I also write poetry in Hindi & English but they are different.
Keep writing. I liked your blog.
Would love to see you on my blog and your views on my poems.
Below is my current url.
Cuckoo
Thanks a ton, Cuckoo !
I will definitely explore your blog to find the SIMILARITY
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